2009 Archives
Comma Ze This, Comma Ze That-Itis
I hate commas, and I love commas. Commas are the source of my greatest weakness in writing. That is why, I hate them. Commas are also the greatest source of my research, so I love commas. I don’t know why, but commas cause confusion in my overly active, highly distracted mind. I have always been under the assumption that commas were meant to either separate singular words, phrases, or clauses or, they were meant to indicate pauses in a sentence. When writing fiction, I write the way the character speaks or thinks. So, there are places I might automatically insert a comma for a pause effect. Where’s the buzzer, let it buzz loudly(NOT!). Just because the pause sounds perfect in my mind as I write, it does not mean it is the perfect place to put a comma.
Just in case, you suffer the comma ze this, comma ze that-itis that I suffer from (where’s my editor), here are a few tips on comma usage I have learned along the way.
1. A series of three of more items should be separated by commas.
The roses in the vase were red, pink, and white.
2. Commas separate related adjectives that modify a word. If the adjectives are not related or connected in meaning, commas are not required.
The tall, thin man leaned against the wall.
The tall tan man leaned against the wall.
3. Commas follows words, phrases, and clauses that have an introductory function.
Finally, Jim scored a home run after striking out the whole season.
As a result, the whole class began to follow the teacher’s lead.
As if that wasn’t enough, the dog barked louder than ever.
4. Stop. Interrupt a sentence with a comma.
The hurricane, unfortunately, turned back toward the shore.
The school, that held the highest scores for the SAT’s, was located in a surprising location.
5. Commas separate two independent clauses separated by a conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, and so).
I could have sworn I heard a train, but it was actually the screeching sound of a low flying airplane.
6. Commas separate the ordinary (this is probably where I got the pause theory from).
Hold still, Kathy, so I can take a great picture.
Stop running inside, Johnny.
The source of my comma tips range from many websites to many books. My favorite book for learning to write effectively is an old text book called “The Confident Writer” by Carol Kanar. I love writing and do my best to alway find time to jot down a few words here and there, even if I have to use commas.
Customer Service
Have you walked out of a store because of poor customer service? Have you hung up the phone because you had to wait so long or the opening message was so long all you did was get distracted before you heard your option? I want to hear about your customer service experiences, good and bad. It hit me as I was driving the other day why some companies succeed no matter the economic climate. Instinctively, I believe it is because of great customer service. However, if you could share with me the good, the bad, and the ugly, I would like to compile a few snapshots of who is successful and who is not based on the type of service provided. Email me at dilsa@simplydilsa.com if you want to be discreet. Or post it here.
And don’t forget, pick up the book that nobody wants to end: Dreams Thrown Away by Dilsa Saunders Bailey.
Ongoing – Just the Beginning of the Marketing Journey
Whether you are self-published, or published through a traditional publisher, only one thing is going to generate sales. Marketing. You have to get the word out, whether it’s pushed through free medium or it is paid. There is no rest for the ambitious writer, yet you still have to find time to write. Thus, my blogging has taken a back seat. I am blogging today to let you know that I am not quitting the blog, just managing my time so I can get back to writing. Selling my book is now an ongoing journey. Each small step is bringing me closer to writing success and a full-time writing career. What steps are you taking toward your dreams?
Journey to the Road of Great Health
Having recently published my novel, Dreams Thrown Away, I realized one thing was missing. I am actively promoting my book and running out of steam faster than I had imagined. So it finally dawned on me, in order to be successful, first I have to be healthy. So today, I am beginning to journal my road to great health, from a 5′2″ small frame, but 184 pounds sound and former smoker to a healthy 130 something pounds with the stamina of a sixteen year old. I am not going to do this alone, I have company and we would love more company. Any tips, ups and downs to a lifestyle change, or kudos you may have will be greatly appreciated.
Here’s how I started my day:
Walked 1.27 miles on the Gazelle
Ate a cup of cheerios with almond breeze milk.
Drank 10 oz of grape juice.
One multi-vitamin.
What did you do?
Dreams Thrown Away – Review and Reader Responses
I couldn’t help but share..simplydilsa
Dreams Thrown Away, the dramatic new novel by novice author, Dilsa Saunders Bailey, is one that transports its reader, not only to the space and time of the characters, but also into their minds. Amazingly, the reader begins to anticipate the next move of the characters. At some point, one begins to feel that this is not a book, but a movie. The readers become voyeurs of the characters as they follow a young southern girl who is whisked away from her small town to the City of Philadelphia shortly after the tragic deaths of her parents.
We watch this main character change from a fragile orphan to a wise woman of the world. Bailey has captured the character’s inner strength, while at the same time retaining the softness and fragility of a nurturer. The characters in this book come to life so readily that the reader may actually find herself speaking to them, as one might do in a movie. Several passages in this novel will make your eyes swell with tears, as this character endures some of the worst tragedies of a lifetime at the hands of the ones she loves, the men in her life.
Although Dilsa Saunders Bailey is a female writer, she has an extraordinary ability to capture the masculinity of the male characters. She is able to speak in the male language as the characters interact with other members of their gender. This book goes from displays of great emotions between lovers to the turmoil and violence between brothers. The reader will find herself on the edge of the seat of this romantic suspense as the acts and threats are carried out. You will not want to miss this novel.
Here are some responses from its readers:
Wow! I can say the book was wonderful. I did not want to put it down. It made you want to keep reading to the end. You never knew what would happen next…every chapter was more exciting then the last. I am so glad I purchased the book. Good luck with future writing.
Sonie D.
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Absolutely loved the book. Keep the stories coming. Love to see the saga of your characters continue. Maybe I will miss E. Lynn a little less.
Linda C.
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This book provoked so much emotion in me, but I couldn’t put it down. Some of it just made me so mad, but I wanted to know how everything unfolded. I couldn’t stop reading.
Jeanne H.
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The characters still haunt me. My colleagues and I talk about them like they are real people.
Catrinia O.
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I was riveted to the story. The characters came alive and the plot kept me rooting for Kali. The book truly was full of suspense and romance.
Donna W.
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I love it!!! I wanted that to happen, but I didn’t really know what to expect at the end. Needless to say, I didn’t forgive Ashton, but I began to like him again. I can’t wait to get the next book. This was really a great book…
Brenda J.
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Much drama and suspense. I just kept turning the pages wanting to find out more about Kalina aka Kali and her fight to overcome the dominance of a powerful and wealthy family. She kept it together through all the tragedy by staying in school at the top of her class. I can’t wait for the sequel…
Sharon F.
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You can read an excerpt of this novel on www.dilsasaundersbailey.com. Dreams Thrown Away is currently available on www.Amazon.com, www.barnesandnoble.com, www.borders.com and it can be ordered by your local bookstore at www.outskirtspress.com/buybooks.
The Book is Published-Now What?
I know I sound like a broken record, because all I can keep saying is “I am so excited”! My book, Dreams Thrown Away, was officially published August 14, 2009. I had the book in my hands less than a week later. It felt so good I carried it around the house. My husband scolded me and told me I couldn’t bring it to bed. I promise, I didn’t take it to bed. Once I got it though, I started marketing full-force. I had begun the legwork prior, sending out announcements that it would soon be released. I set up my website, www.dilsasaundersbailey.com and took pre-orders. I ordered a huge lot and began to sell them to my friends, family, and co-workers.
So what are my goals, and what should be done? I self-published, but from what I have been reading whether you self-publish or go the traditional way, you have to market your book in order to be successful. These are some of the steps I have taken and will take to make this book a publishing success:
1) Take pre-orders offering free shipping and an autographed copy on my website.
2) Send news releases to the local papers, organizations where I am a member, and to city publications where I have lived.
3) Send information sheets with a full-blown copy of the cover to book clubs. These sheets include an excerpt of the book and where it can be purchased, plus an offer to have a visit from the author.
4) Schedule book signings at independent book stores.
5) Email the full release status of my book and a reminder that the special offer of free shipping and an autographed copy ends soon.
There are more tactics that I plan to employ, but the most important tactic is to not ever quit. To be a success, one has to remain focused. If you have that book in you, follow your dream. See it. Believe it. Achieve it!
